tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post5817195292291480476..comments2023-05-03T22:11:10.752+10:00Comments on A Writer's Vein: [Fiction] Friday Challenge #178 for Oct 22nd, 2010A Writer's Veinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05112294778762654630noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post-52754491474580882162010-10-27T03:52:59.440+11:002010-10-27T03:52:59.440+11:00I agree great world building in such a short time....I agree great world building in such a short time. Creative and complex scifi story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post-46630314543655586382010-10-26T00:47:39.462+11:002010-10-26T00:47:39.462+11:00It took a reread to connect that the main story wa...It took a reread to connect that the main story was happening on the iphone. A very complex story that shows a lot of imagination. I enjoy these futuristic tales.Laura Rachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407312422139066511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post-83520319380051992322010-10-25T00:22:23.599+11:002010-10-25T00:22:23.599+11:00Weird knowing the iPhone will one day be a museum ...Weird knowing the iPhone will one day be a museum piece.John Penderhttp://johnpender.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post-82637412321139042172010-10-24T21:09:01.994+11:002010-10-24T21:09:01.994+11:00I love the ideas in this, the regulated toilet bre...I love the ideas in this, the regulated toilet break etc. And the iPhone controlling an assassin... I want to know what the deal is there! Is it just the game or does it actually control an alternate universe? Very cool!Staceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06446339382334854910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post-48196496151152283822010-10-24T03:49:10.657+11:002010-10-24T03:49:10.657+11:00Nice world building in a very short space. I love...Nice world building in a very short space. I love the idea of a sci-fi assassin. Well done!Shellihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03068094486297918345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post-84643697135366496452010-10-23T09:05:15.661+11:002010-10-23T09:05:15.661+11:00Oh that was fantastic! Freaky for me on a personal...Oh that was fantastic! Freaky for me on a personal level as a fan of video games, but also very clever sci-fi. Also, did I detect a hint of CYOA in there?!Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post-37319683404155811072010-10-23T02:28:48.486+11:002010-10-23T02:28:48.486+11:00creepy, delightful and for so many levels and reas...creepy, delightful and for so many levels and reasons.<br /><br />I had to re- read this to gain a fuller understanding - so cleverly written Juz!<br /><br />loving how wide the scope has been for this prompt.<br /><br />visitors can see mine at<br />http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2010/10/passage-of-darkness.htmlAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.com