tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post8585372556155323985..comments2023-05-03T22:11:10.752+10:00Comments on A Writer's Vein: [Fiction] Friday Challenge #175 for Oct 1st, 2010A Writer's Veinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05112294778762654630noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post-15973751050176509822010-10-05T13:51:28.260+11:002010-10-05T13:51:28.260+11:00You got me, I love dogs! Poor Shad, such a faithfu...You got me, I love dogs! Poor Shad, such a faithful dog. I was wondering if Shad was not human, because of some of your imagery, but I never expected a dog!Staceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06446339382334854910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post-40842747325284551172010-10-03T15:18:49.750+11:002010-10-03T15:18:49.750+11:00wow! I was so surprised and had to go back to read...wow! I was so surprised and had to go back to read it again with the new knowledge. Bravo! Bravo!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post-47049532745715082682010-10-02T20:09:42.874+10:002010-10-02T20:09:42.874+10:00That was awesome. Very poetic, well written and sa...That was awesome. Very poetic, well written and sad sniff. Did you know James Herbert wrote "Fluke" a novel from the perspective of dog who remembers his previous life as a human?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post-68753019480977267682010-10-02T16:25:38.713+10:002010-10-02T16:25:38.713+10:00Fabulous perspective with the prompt. The imagery...Fabulous perspective with the prompt. The imagery was very strong as was the idea of feeling alive. I haven't been around the Fiction Friday prompts for a while, but love catching up on some great fiction.<br />Adam B @revhappinessAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post-835280243135293592010-10-02T11:37:32.162+10:002010-10-02T11:37:32.162+10:00I quite enjoyed this one and was wondering who els...I quite enjoyed this one and was wondering who else was going to go the shipwreck route with this prompt.John Penderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15713403125655682082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post-67083837788620141092010-10-02T00:14:27.774+10:002010-10-02T00:14:27.774+10:00woof!! I am in love with descriptive writing and f...woof!! I am in love with descriptive writing and feel that it has - for too long - been denied its place within our reading 'fashion'.<br /><br />you captured the smells and sights beautifully. an easy and enjoyable read<br /><br />visitors can see mine over at http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2010/10/lonely-in-paradise.htmlAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post-37132556864135121932010-10-01T21:46:06.875+10:002010-10-01T21:46:06.875+10:00You surprised me with the dog twist at the end.
T...You surprised me with the dog twist at the end.<br /><br />This is some amazing descriptive writing, filling in all the details with sounds, sights, smells, and tastes. I liked: "On the air, hints of seaweed, shell-grit, brine and coconut." <br /><br />Besides the wonderful descriptions, you managed to pack an emotional punch through the thoughts of Shad, very insightful.Laura Rachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407312422139066511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578246995965812063.post-59341914762253101442010-10-01T19:00:22.614+10:002010-10-01T19:00:22.614+10:00Wow man, that was poetic. A canine Robinson Crusoe...Wow man, that was poetic. A canine Robinson Crusoe was always going to win over this dog-lover ... so for him to die in the end and with him so close to rescue packed a punch. Well done.Jason Cogginshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09509338964933754054noreply@blogger.com